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3 Powerful Ways To Improve Your Storytelling (And Business!) In 15 Minutes

3 Powerful Ways To Improve Your Storytelling (And Business!) In Less Than 15 MinutesSo this weekend, I’ve found that winning an imaginary lottery, Finding Nemo and Billy Idol all have something in common.

This is because I’ve spent the weekend thinking of ways to improve my storytelling.

Maybe you do that too, sometimes? Using your weekends to think about how to develop your business and your career?

If you’re anything like me, then I have some AWESOME ways for you to challenge your brain and get better results in the process.

And the best part is, that neither of these techniques should take you more than 15 minutes to try!

Sounds good? Let’s go:

The Pixar Pitch: Find Your Storyline

3 Powerful Ways To Improve Your Storytelling (And Business!) In Less Than 15 MinutesThis is pretty cool. Emma Coats, story artist at Pixar, has broken down the key elements of great storytelling in a very elegant way.

The Pixar Pitch, lately made very popular by Dan Pink in his book To Sell Is Human, is a great way for you to find a narrative, a storyline, in your business.

Here’s the script for you to try:

Once upon a time there was _________. Every day _________. One day _________. Because of that _________. Because of that _________. Until finally _________.
Jay Connor of Working Differently gives this example of a plot for Finding Nemo:

1. Once upon a time there was a widowed fish, named Marlin, who was extremely protective of his only son, Nemo.
2. Every day Marlin warned Nemo of the ocean’s dangers and implored him not to swim far away.
3. One day in an act of defiance, Nemo ignores his father’s warnings and swims into the open water.
4. Because of that he is captured by a diver and ends up in the fish tank of a dentist in Sydney.
5. Because of that Marlin sets off on a journey to recover Nemo, enlisting the help of other sea creatures along the way.
6. Until finallyMarlin and Nemo find each other, reunite and learn that love depends on trust.

When I tried this for our agency Mad Science Digital, here’s what I came up with:

Once upon a time, there were no computers and no internet.

Every day, the great companies of planet Earth had to rely on a few wealthy mass distributors of propaganda to reach their consumers.

One day, the advancements of information technology exploded and all companies had to change their way of reaching out, but most had few ideas on how to do this.

Because of that, evil pundits posing as “social media experts” started making lots of money from great companies by convincing them to pollute the digital universe with even more clutter and complexity.

Because of that, digital strategist Jerry Silfwer struggled long and hard with the idea that maybe great companies should do the opposite; instead of trying to communicate everything, everywhere and all the time, they should focus on making the world a little bit clearer instead?

Until finally, Jerry decided to take a leap of faith together with a small group of brave companies, all tired of pushing one message after the other with no effect, and so the agency Mad Science Digital was founded.

The Rebel Yell Statement: Find Your Purpose

3 Powerful Ways To Improve Your Storytelling (And Business!) In Less Than 15 MinutesMaybe you work to earn money, put food on the table and hopefully have some fun in the process. But is that all? Maybe there’s also something deeper, a core purpose, that drives us to go the extra mile?

In a guest post on Ryan Lee, Why Rebels get Rich, copywriter Kevin Rogers published this simple yet effective script, The Rebel Yell Statement, named after the legendary rock anthem by Billy Idol.

My name is _________, I love _________ but was fed up with _________. So I created _________ that _________.


This is of course quite similar to the Pixar Pitch above, but where the former helps you understand the basic story of your business, the Rebel Yell Statement helps you put the finger on your core reason for being in business.

Here’s an example by Kevin Rogers of a person you might recognise:

“My name is Steve, I love computers but was fed up with the snails pace of commercial technology. So I created a user-friendly computer that processes information faster than anything else out there today.”

Here’s the Rebel Yell Statement I wrote for my blog, Doktor Spinn:

My name is Jerry, I love public relations, but was fed up with dinosaur agencies giving clients bullshit advice on digital marketing. So I created a blog that shares knowledge based on academic research, hands-on experience and true passion.

The Lottery Question: Find Your Business Values

3 Powerful Ways To Improve Your Storytelling (And Business!) In Less Than 15 MinutesImagine your organisation won the lottery, and money no longer is a primary motivator. You and your co-workers are now taken care of financially, and the brand has earned a certain amount of notoriety by having the winning ticket.

Taking money out of the equation might seem counterintuitive for a business. But if you try this thought model for YOUR business, you’ll find that some important values falls out.

So ask yourself this question:

With all that money in the bank, what would your company do next?


Here’s how I imagine this scenario for our agency Mad Science Digital:

The right people would hand in their resignations and the right people would stay. And I would do nothing to influence anyone’s decision.

Great minds need time for reflection to grow stronger and happier, so we would have more vacation time than the usual industry standard.

We would set aside time each week to explore new academic research and interact with the scientific community on behaviorial research, human psychology and online marketing.

I wouldn’t go out on a frantic hiring spree with all that money, but instead invest heavily in the people we already have.

We would say no to working with clients if we don’t feel passionated about their business objectives.

Our kickoffs, conferences and teambuilding travels would be so epic that it would be ridiculous.

We would do pro bono work for important non-profits that can’t afford our expertise otherwise.

In spite of having all that money in our bank accounts, we would still work hard, because we consider hard work to be a virtue and a way of life.

Now, the question is, what could we implement today — even without winning an actual lottery?

Now, if you try one or two or three of these techniques, I would really love to read them in the comments! You can improve your storytelling for your business, but also for your blog if you have one. Or maybe just for yourself and your individual career? I read all comments carefully.

Have a friend who would like to try these techniques? Send them this article and help me reach the right people in the process. Thanks!

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  • Oct 29 Posted 3 years ago D4CreativeGroup

    We tried the Pixar Pitch!

    Once upon a time there was a shortage of full-service, in-house advertising agencies in the Greater Philadelphia area. Every day businesses hopelessly fought to market their products and services, spending loads of money on time-consuming strategies. One day a young man and wife realized that they could run a business much better than those advertising moguls out there. Because of that, they decided to start a company from their home in South Philadelphia, which later would move to an 16,000 square foot warehouse. Because of that, they had the space they needed to build a production studio, recording studio, editing suite, special effects suite, andadd a refrigerator filled with an endless supply of caffeinated beverages. Until finally, they were able to hire dozens of brilliant minds all focused on the same goal: to make a difference in the lives of their clients and in the lives of each other, and to be the first to the  kitchen on bagel Wednesday.

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